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ABHISHEK SHARMAAIR 38· 2024

Question Q.9GS1GS1

Critically examine the effects of globalisation on the youth in India.

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Introduction

"Globalisation refers to intensification of socio-economic relations in such a way that local happenings are shaped by events happening thousands of miles away" - Anthony Giddens

26 words

Main Body

"Globalisation refers to intensification of socio-economic relations in such a way that local happenings are shaped by events happening thousands of miles away" - Anthony Giddens

Effects of globalisation on youth in India

Positive effects:

Better access to education
Better access to healthcare, new ideas
Access to funding & capital for startups

Opportunities

Ideas like liberty, freedom, independence
Ability to impact the world → through social media
Availability of choices in terms of food, education, dress, entertainment

[Continuation of effects diagram showing negative impacts and challenges]

Negative effects/Challenges:

Western/material culture (protectionism)
Caste-based politics
Demands of autonomy & insurgent movement

[Diagram showing challenges, Strengths box with "Better access to education", "Foreign universities", "Better access to healthcare", "New ideas", "Access to funding & capital for startups", and Opportunities box with various benefits]

These effects must be handled to ensure that India's diversity remains her strength and doesn't become her weakness.

3Showed the power of non-violent resistance.
Victory of peace & satyagraha over violence.
Determined the nature of Indian freedom struggle.
4Brought backward classes under the fold of Indian Freedom Struggle.

Thus Vaishnava Satyagraha was a watershed moment in Indian modern history.

— ABHISHEK SHARMA · AIR 38

202 words8 paragraphs11 bullet points

Conclusion

These effects must be handled to ensure that India's diversity remains her strength and doesn't become her weakness.

18 words

Diagram

Structured breakdown of effects of globalization on youth: Positive effects (education, healthcare, funding), Opportunities (liberty, social media impact, choices)

  • Strong opening with authoritative definition
  • Clear categorization of effects
  • Mentions social media as contemporary channel
  • Good use of structured format
  • Balanced presentation of positive and negative effects
  • Identifies cultural challenges
  • Good visual organization
  • Clear structural breakdown with numbered points
  • Concise conclusion linking to broader historical significance

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Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Effects of Globalization on Indian society

Globalization and youth

Youth impacts

Writing Stats

246

Total words

8

Paragraphs

11

Bullets

Critical and analytical

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