How will you explain that the values of tolerance and inclusiveness which were deeply embedded in ancient Indian society continue to persist and flourish in the present times?
Main Body
'Tolerance' refers to the willingness to accept feelings, beliefs or belief that are different from one's own. Inclusiveness is covering a range of subjects and areas.
Enduring legacy
(Eg) Kumbh Mela welcomes people of all paths => Tolerance
(Eg) Diwali "The festival of Lights"
(Eg) Hinduism → Shaivism, Vaishnavism, Shaktism, Smartism
Modern Manifestations
Challenges → religious tensions, social inequalities, Negative impacts of globalization, Negative impacts of technology, misinformation, deepfakes etc.
Hereafter, India's legacy of tolerance and inclusiveness continued to evolve. By acknowledging both strength and weaknesses, & by promoting inter faith dialogue & social justice, India can strive for a harmonious & inclusive future.
— Saloni Vats · AIR 273
- Clear definitions at the start
- Good use of specific examples
- Systematic organization of points
- Balanced discussion of challenges
- Contemporary references to cinema and media
- Forward-looking conclusion
Saloni Vats
Salient features of Indian Society, Diversity of India
Tolerance and Inclusiveness in Indian Society
Historical continuity of Indian values
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