Introduction
poor mental health and its relation to youth socialization
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Main Body
Positive aspects: (a) Greater stress given to values beyond family (b) Formation of like-minded groups of communities through Run Club. Negative aspects: (a) Limited interaction with parents impairs confidence at early age (b) Exposure to negative values outside family and through internet cause misgivings (c) These factors impact mental health
— Harsh Nehara · AIR 74
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Conclusion
Thus, greater role of family is needed in both elderly and youth's life
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- Balanced discussion of both positive and negative aspects
- Mentions specific example (Run Club)
- Acknowledges role of internet in socialization
- Concludes with practical recommendation about family role
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Topper
Harsh Nehara
AIR 74
Subject & Paper
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Topic
Role of Women and Women's Organization, Population and Associated Issues, Poverty and Developmental issues
Youth Socialization and Mental Health
Impact of socialization on mental health and family role
Writing Stats
72
Total words
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Paragraphs
Analytical and structured with bullet-point format
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